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Planning, Revising and Editing Writing

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EnglishWriting Composition|Ages 11—14|ID: mt_av-uRBrhwT

Plan, revise, and edit writing to improve coherence and effectiveness — considering how the writing reflects its intended audience and purpose, amending vocabulary, grammar, and structure, and proofreading for accurate spelling, punctuation, and grammar

Mastery Evidence

  • Revise a draft to improve paragraph structure, adding or removing material for coherence
  • Edit sentence-level issues including word choice, grammar, and punctuation before finalising
  • Reflect on whether the writing achieves its intended effect on the target audience and adjust accordingly

Assessment Prompt

“After [child] finishes a first draft, do they go back and make real improvements — not just fixing spelling, but changing sentences or reorganising ideas to make it better?”

Curriculum Standards6 alignments

W.6.5Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy in History/Social Studies, Science, and Technical Subjects
W.6.5

With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1–3 up to and including grade 6 on page 53.)

English Language Arts
W.7.5Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy in History/Social Studies, Science, and Technical Subjects
W.7.5

With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on how well purpose and audience have been addressed. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1–3 up to and including grade 7 on page 53.)

English Language Arts
W.8.5Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy in History/Social Studies, Science, and Technical Subjects
W.8.5

With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on how well purpose and audience have been addressed. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1–3 up to and including grade 8 on page 53.)

English Language Arts
KS3-ENG-W-2aThe national curriculum in England
Consider audience and purpose

considering how their writing reflects the audiences and purposes for which it was intended

· Key Stage 3
KS3-ENG-W-2bThe national curriculum in England
Amend vocabulary, grammar and structure

amending the vocabulary, grammar and structure of their writing to improve its coherence and overall effectiveness

· Key Stage 3
KS3-ENG-W-2cThe national curriculum in England
Pay attention to accurate grammar, punctuation and spelling

paying attention to accurate grammar, punctuation and spelling; applying the spelling patterns and rules set out in English appendix 1 to the key stage 1 and 2 programmes of study for English

· Key Stage 3

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